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IELTS/Task 2

' Raising household electricity fees is the most effective solution to the problems associated with power generation and environmental pollution ' issue


Topic : 

Raising household electricity fees is the most effective solution to the problems associated with power generation and environmental pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective in reducing the environmental pollution caused by power generation?

 

Answer :

 

It is a common belief that increasing the cost of household utilities can solve the environmental problems caused by producing electricity. However, I firmly believe that raising household bills would not be helpful and that this problem can only truly be addressed by using clean energy sources.

 

To begin with, day-to-day residential energy consumption only accounts for a small part of overall energy use. The environmental destruction caused by energy production would remain a problem even if residential consumption decreased as a result of raising energy costs. Factories and businesses should be the cones that are regulated since they are actually the main energy consumers. In fact, in the United States, industrial and commercial activities account for more than half of all energy use, while residential energy use makes up only 20 percent. Therefore, burdening households with higher electricity bills would not lead to a great reduction in pollution.

 

Nevertheless, there are other solutions to the problem-environmental pollution. One of the ways to decrease the environmental damage caused by power production is to expand the use of clean, renewable energy. Clean energy sources, like solar, wind, and hydroelectric power, do not produce pollution to the same extent as fossil fuels. Developing more energy systems that use these sources would reduce our reliance on fossil-fuel-power plants. For examples, the Korean government currently provides incentives for companies that convert their power supply to renewable sources. This has boosted the growth of renewable energy production considerably and means that Korea is on track to increase its use of green power sources in the near future. This would result in a major droop in the country's overall pollution.

 

To sum up, raising electricity bills would not have a positive impact on the pollution problem because households represent a very small amount of overall energy. In this regard, the issue can only be resolved by increasing the use of more clean alternative energy sources.