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IELTS/Task 2

' Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children' issue


Topic : 

Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

Answer :

 

As the shape of family had been changed to a dual-income family, parenting by grandparents become a solution to raise children. Some people argue that family members should take care the youth while others assert that it should be given by professional organizations. In this essay, I will discuss both views and suggest my own view.

 

It is true that childcare by grandparents became a common practice since parents can not spend enough time to grow up youngsters because of excessive work. Parenting by grandparents has a positive effect on the development of children. The youth can enhance the communication skills with different age groups which is one of the most required abilities recently. Moreover, grandparents can provide useful information or customs which has been conveyed from the ancestors and it is hard to achieve in contemporary society. Meanwhile, children who were grown up by grandparents would become a polite person since they were taught the attitude needed in the conversation with others.

 

However, abilities of grandparents are not sufficient enough to raise their grandson because of the lack of physical fitness. That is why many parents send their children to childcare centers. Most  rofessional organizations have a concrete system to grow up the youth using facilities and equipment that are suitable to educate them. Furthermore, in organization, a number of tutors who are well-educated throughout numerous training courses and field experiences work for only children with professional knowledge. Therefore, sending young people to childcare center creates a good influence on the development of them in both physical and academic perspectives.

 

In conclusion, while grandparents can provide practical education to the youth, I opine that parents should send their children to childcare organization which can raise them in systematic ways and reduce the burden of grandparents.