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IELTS/Task 2

' Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money ' issue


Topic :

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

 

Answer :

 

When people are in unfavorable situations, it is arduous to advance forward. While some people argue that it is best to embrace bad circumstances, others believe it is better to strive for an improvement. This essay will delve into these two arguments before declaring a position.

 

The rationale behind the argument from people who say that it is best to accept a bad situation is that they can’t simply change the status quo because of powerful outer forces. For example, the sharp rise in housing prices is something that individuals can’t solve. According to statistics from the government, the housing prices in Seoul area have risen by nearly ten percent just over the last few months. Meanwhile, the average salary of people who live in Seoul have remained the same. Furthermore, one out of three people who are in their 20s live in shoddy single room apartments. Rising housing prices and how much money people are paid from their employers are outer forces that they can’t have any influence upon. Therefore, some people believe that it is better to be satisfied with their bad situation rather than putting too much effort to better their circumstances which seems implausible.

 

On the other hand, there are people who argue it is better to try and improve their bad situations. They usually quote the cases of many people who rose through the difficult time with their own efforts. For example, our parents’ generation was in much more difficult circumstances both economically and socially. To be specific, there was no civil government and the country was run by a dictator who oppressed people’s basic human rights. Also, most of them were in abjectly poverty since the country was ruined by consecutive misfortunes ranging from war to economic debacles. Nonetheless, the generation believed that future would be more promising as long as they strive to overcome those seemingly insurmountable obstacles. Thanks to that spirit, now most people in South Korea are above the poverty line and the country is run by democratically elected civil government. The generation is the manifestation of what happens when people never give up and move forward for better future.

 

In summary, both arguments have their own strong logics. However, I am in favor of the latter since I believe that people can overcome any obstacles with one’s strong will. In addition, I don’t think the fatalistic spirit will do any good for people to better their circumstances.